This is a very good first draft; you have covered all of the necessary technologies and explained them. I have awarded a merit for this piece as you are lacking specific examples in some places, e.g., low cost consumer products, pay-per-view programming. Add these and you will be looking at a distinction.
Some of your slides are a little wordy and the one with cable and satellite on is incorrect (you may have gotten it from an American site). Make changes to condense the information and make room for specific examples.
Alycia,
ReplyDeleteThis is a very good first draft; you have covered all of the necessary technologies and explained them. I have awarded a merit for this piece as you are lacking specific examples in some places, e.g., low cost consumer products, pay-per-view programming. Add these and you will be looking at a distinction.
Some of your slides are a little wordy and the one with cable and satellite on is incorrect (you may have gotten it from an American site). Make changes to condense the information and make room for specific examples.
EllieB
Well done Alyicia, still wordy (in fact, more so) but this is very detailed with well-chosen examples.
ReplyDeleteDistinction achieved.
EllieB